11) Headlining and Sub-Headlining Effective Content Pieces (OUTDATED)

@Fristo

What a festive title, and the subheadings are very clear.

@Fristo

Relevant title and easy to understand subheadings

@Fristo Great title - really adds curiosity - As for subheadings, I did mean "subtitle" but those are great subheadings as well!

@Fristo Great Job.

@Fristo

The title and subheading help makes everything clear! Great job!

@Fristo

A nice way to rephrase the headings ,easy to understand what the article is about!

@Fristo

You've lightened the best perspective for these times in just a few words. For sure is an emotional touch for anyone who's seeking guidance !

@Fristo great heading and easy to understand subheadings :)

@Fristo

strength: Loved the subheadings as they are concise yet catchy

weakness: the title could be a bit more catchy by adding numbers or the 'wh' or how questions.

@Fristo

I like the sub heading that speak out of the article content.

@Fristo
I love your response! Thank you for sharing.

@Fristo
Festive and intriguing titles. Simple and to the point. Nice job :)

@Fristo

I liked how you used simple, yet eye-catching words! It catches the reader's attention to make them inclined to read the article. Good job!

@Fristo

@Fristo very positive, light engaging headings!!! will surely read this article :)

@Fristo

I really love this title! I feel like it is fun an engaging and I think that your subheadings are really good too!

@Fristo

I like the title-perfect for the holidays, and the sub-headings are very creative.

-Kpopcat2020

@Fristo Your title and the subheading are to the point and eye-catching. Well done!

@Fristo

A creative title and subheading are clear and straightcut enabling the reader to develop a general idea on what the content can be about

@Fristo I love it 💜

@Fristo

I like the article title and the subheadings as they get straight to the point.

with that being said, the article topic was a create choice being it was still during the beginning of covid.

@Fristo love this 

@Fristo

You have such a great way of connecting with an audience, not only does your title gain interest. The subheading titles also keep this audience engaged in your article. Great Work!

@SynSavory Simple and sweet heading and subheading.

@SynSavory

I really like your subtitle, it's very sweet and friendly. Well done!

@SynSavory great example of how we could of course add the numerical bit onto our subtitle - however, in general, we usually use it for the very first heading/title of the article in light of SEO purposes -- regardless, this is still a great method for general articles. for example, one's that won't have lists but still have a certain number of points.

@SynSavory love both the title and subtitle great job no improves right on brief

@SynSavory
Simple and sober!

simple and kind heading and subheading

@SynSavory

That's so good simple and short is easy to reaf

@blissart

I love in your sub heading you made it a challenge! That would definitely increase interaction and encourage people to actually take part in it!

I also love the use of the word exiting in your title, it indices the reader and makes them want to read more!

Great job 👏

@blissart I really like your new title, especially the use of the number to represent a list as well as the word "exciting" to help click it too after wanting to relate. However, I highly suggest using the capitalization tool for Titles. Your's would read: The 6 Exciting Ways to Cope With Festival Loneliness

As for subheadings, I did mean "subtitle" but those are great subheadings as well!

@blissart

I loved how you used the number rightly to make the headline attractive.

Great job, Bliss.

I like this one it’s short and gets to the point. I need to work on my skills.

@KatherrinneP Your headline uses the question word "why" to increase attractiveness and has good capitalization. The subheadline is usually de-capitalized though. Also, I think they should be more linked to the holiday and Covid themes, as those are the main subjects in the article.

@KatherrinneP

The framing of the headline & sub headline is good. It can be easily read.

Would have been better if you included the COVID angle to it as well. As it's a recent article.

@FinleyTews

The title is eye-catching. The "Blues" stayed in my head when I wrote my first title. Sorry that I sorta borrowed your idea.

@FinleyTews great use of the number and the words "chase away" to gain interest - the subtitle summarizes the article very well too

@FinleyTews

A catchy title with the use of "chase away" phrase

Subtitle could be more empathetic

@WendinCaring Your subheadline sounds quite attractive. Both the titles are on point. It's okay if you also use "holiday blues", it's a common phrase :)

@WendinCaring I really like the subtitle, the title is also great for a general piece but perhaps could use restructuring to include a number? How does "6 Survival Tips for Lonely Holidays" sound to you?

@Azalea98 nice take on both the headline and subtitle! As the article is about the holidays perhaps adding that bit into the heading "secluded during the holidays" could help -- I would also like to recommend checking the capitalization of your heading - yours should read "How to Overcome Feeling Somber and Secluded During the Holidays"

@Azalea98 Nice heading! Like Soul said, might be useful to focus on the holiday aspect of the article to embody it in your headline! Thanks for sharing.

@Happy900

Feedback: Straight to the point, so this should save the readers' time. Personally I think they can still be more creative and shortened, but still good.

@Happy900

I love this proposal! For the sub-headlines I would suggest to switch up the wording to make it "Coping with limited human interaction!"

@11820Read Great use of incorporating a number as well as using a positive word "recolor" that definitely helps add curiosity too. As for the subheadings, these are great - the lesson was updated to reflect the need for a "subheadline" to summarize the article but these are great too!