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BlatantHonesty February 27th

The monastery, perched on a craggy outcrop that clawed at the sky, was a place of stark silence. Two disciples, Kaelen and Rhys, moved through its stone corridors like shadows, their footsteps muffled by years of quiet observation. Their lives were a cycle of chores: sweeping courtyards, tending the sparse vegetable garden, fetching water from the icy spring. Their true labor, however, was the silent study of the head monk, a man whose serenity was a constant, unsettling enigma.

He was a still point in a turning world. Rain lashed the monastery walls, wind howled through the mountain passes, and the daily squabbles of the other monks echoed through the halls, but the head monk remained untouched. His face, etched with the lines of time, held an almost unnerving calm. It wasn't the placidity of sleep, but the quiet intensity of a flame burning steadily in a vacuum. He was, as Kaelen often whispered, "a rock against the tide."

This very stillness bred a peculiar anxiety in his disciples. They dissected his every gesture, every glance, searching for the secret to his unshakeable composure. They yearned for a single word, a scrap of insight, that would illuminate the path to such inner peace. But the monk remained silent, a living koan, his presence a constant, unanswered question.

Then, the inevitable happened. A fever gripped the old monk, a relentless fire that withered his strength and dimmed his eyes. The monastery held its breath, a collective dread settling over its inhabitants. Kaelen and Rhys, sensing the approaching end, finally dared to approach the monk's humble cottage.

He lay on his simple cot, his breath shallow and ragged. Yet, even in his weakened state, his eyes held that familiar, unsettling clarity.

"Sage," Kaelen began, his voice trembling slightly, "for years we have observed you, seeking the wisdom you possess. Now, as you prepare to leave us, we beg you: share with us the essence of what you have learned."

Rhys, his hands clasped tightly, nodded in agreement. "Please, master. What is the key to your peace?"

The monk looked at them, a faint smile playing on his lips. Then, a dry, rasping chuckle escaped his throat. "Wisdom?" he croaked, his eyes twinkling with an almost mischievous light. "What wisdom?"

The words hung in the air, a final, bewildering riddle. Before Kaelen and Rhys could react, the monk's eyes closed, and his breath ceased.

They stood there, stunned, the silence in the cottage deepening, becoming a heavy, tangible thing. "What wisdom?" The phrase echoed in their minds, a cruel jest, or perhaps, the ultimate truth. Had they spent years chasing a phantom, a mirage of enlightenment? Or had the monk, in his final moment, revealed the most profound lesson of all: that wisdom was not a thing to be acquired, but a state of being, a quiet acceptance of the moment, stripped bare of all illusions. He had simply been. He had simply existed. And that, perhaps, was all there was.

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User Profile: soulsings
soulsings 2 days ago

@BlatantHonesty I enjoyed your story very much.

I think that people often think that wisdom is something you get like learning at a school like acquiring knowledge.

Another approach is that wisdom is the clarity of mind that is realized when unethical behavior and the ignorance that sows the seed of it is finally loosened and let go of. 

I think the old monk laughed not because wisdom is a myth, but because getting wisdom and or expressing it in words is like trying to explain the taste of apple pie to someone that has never tasted apples or apple pie before. The wisdom without delusions that sees things just as they are is maybe what the old monk tried to convey.

Or none of the above. 

Thank you for sharing.

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User Profile: BlatantHonesty
BlatantHonesty OP 2 days ago

@soulsings

I'm glad you liked it. 💛

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