why did you rest rabbit? the race was the only thing they loved about you.

"your overconfidence made the tortoise win"
the rabbit's ears buzzed with their words
and so, it wondered
was it pride that caused him to pause,
or the weight of running a race he never had the choice to refuse?
was he chasing a breath that had left him long ago?
like a candle still burning but melting its core.
or maybe something else
but does it really matter anymore?
they carved his name in motion,
but never asked if he wanted to move
so he sprinted, he ran, he never looked back
for they told him who he was, before he even had the chance to ask.
tell me, is it silly to want to rest?
tell me, for he didn't win, will he still belong?
"slow and steady wins the race"
but the tortoise never ran to win
he walked a path that was his alone,
never weighed down by the hunger to be first.
no cheers, no pressure, no one reminding him
that he must win for he was born to.
no finish line that burned if he walked instead,
no story to tell if the rabbit hadn’t bled.
the rabbit, oh,
they hung medals like a leash on his throat,
called it his crown, called it his hope
but the day he rested, they asked why he left them behind,
never cared about what was trapped in his mind.
they told him, he was made for the run,
that to stop was to disappoint.
that to stop was to be forgotten.
so run, rabbit, run
get up, don't rest, run
run away or they'll curse you of being ordinary
run away for stillness is not a part of your story.
run till you bleed, they don't care you're tired
the moment you stop, you're nothing but expired.
don’t slow down, they only love those who obey.
run till you reach the finish line
and look, it's still a long way.
but what if the finish line is never the end,
but just the place where they stopped watching?
and if love waits only at the finish line's view,
then tell me, was it ever even true?

@suu1309 such a creative take on the story💖 and so sad to know that's the truth for so many. Beautifully written 💗💗 gives you a giant tiny hug 💗
@Tinywhisper11 thank youu much so you beautiful soul. i appreciate your words a lot<3
@suu1309 aahh, my keyboard seems upset. *thank youu so much<3

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@suu1309 THIS IS BRILLIANT!! ...turning a childhood fable into an existential crisis for the poor rabbit (and poor some of us)! The way you explore the weight of expectations, the pressure to keep running and the haunting question of whether the finish line even matters * standing ovation *
Honestly.... this makes me want to sit the rabbit down, hand them a cup of tea and say "Buddy, you don’t have to run just because they told you to" This isn't just a poem. It's a reflection of how society treats ambition, burnout and the conditional nature of approval. It leaves a lingering ache and I love that. You’ve captured something profound here—something that demands to be felt. * bows *